William Stafford’s
,Traveling Through the Dark is beautifully written poem
that expresses one of life’s most challenging aspects. It is the story of a
man’s solitary struggle to deal with a tragic event that he encounters.
Driving down a narrow mountain road, “Traveling Through the Dark,” the
narrator of the poem encounters a deer. This line might fool the reader into
believing the poem has a happy theme; after all, a deer is a beautiful creature
that most people associate with nature or freedom. The first word of the second
line, however, reverses this belief. The deer is actually “dead on the edge of
the Wilson River Road.” The traveler decides to send the deer over the edge of
the canyon, because “to swerve might make more dead.” This line indicates that
if he fails or “swerves” in his decision, the deer could cause an accident on
the narrow road that might cost more lives.
The narrator armed with this
purpose, proceeds with his unfortunate task. He approaches the deer and observes
that it is a recent killing. He drags her off to the side of the road, noting
that she is “large in the belly.” The narrator soon discovers that the deer is
pregnant, and that her fawn is still alive. At this moment he hesitates,
distraught over the decision he knows he must make.
Faced by the
implications of this decision, the narrator considers his surroundings: his car
stares ahead into the darkness with its lowered parking lights, purring its
steady engine; he stands “in the glare of the warm exhaust turning red,” and can
“hear the wilderness listen.” All of these describe the anxiety he feels about
his responsibility. The personified car is expectantly awaiting his decision,
eager to get moving again. The wilderness takes on human abilities also,
silently witnessing the outcome it knows must be, but wishing it was otherwise.
As the narrator ponders all of this, the taillights of the car illuminate him in
their red light. This is reflective of the heightened emotions he is
experiencing, but also brings to mind the bloody fate of the deer and her unborn
fawn. The narrator thinks “hard for us all” and proceeds with the task he had
committed to since the beginning. He pushes the deer and her unborn fawn over
the edge into the river. There is much more to “Traveling Through the Dark”
than its literal story. The title, along with the story itself, suggests man’s
disregard for nature. Humans seem to travel through life like a horse with
blinders on, oblivious to the consequences or implications of their actions. The
driver who killed the deer is an example of this theme. He was also traveling
through the dark, as the deer was a “recent killing.” The fact that he left it
in the middle of the road, with no further thought for it or anyone else behind
him, implies his immoral or dark nature.
The main theme of the poem however,
is the sadness and misfortune that accompany us on our journey through life. The
Wilson River Road, in which the events of the poem take place, is symbolic of
the road of life that we all travel upon. The darkness and the setting of the
poem point to the seclusion and indecision that we experience when dealing with
life’s tragedies. Many people feel as confused as the narrator as he was
“stumbling back of the car” in his attempt to do the right thing. In his moment
of decision, though, the only company the narrator had was the silent and
unheeding world around him. Unfortunately, many situations we must face in life
are like this. People are not always around to help us through hard times, and
most tragedies, such as death, are obstacles that we must overcome individually.
As described in the poem though, death is an inevitability that we cannot
change, and therefore should not deter us from our path. Like the narrator’s car
staring toward the road, anxious about moving on, we all are eager to put these
events behind us and continue on with life. This last aspect is symbolized by
the river in the poem that runs adjacent to the road. As we push life’s
obstacles off to the side, they fall into this symbolic river and are swept
farther and farther away from us by the current of time, allowing us to continue
on our way.
William Stafford does an excellent job of holding to his
objective in this poem. His style of story telling kept his main theme at focus,
and did not allow the more emotional aspects to take over. His story gives
clarification to the overwhelming and chaotic nature of life. We must learn to
deal with tragedies such as death, as they are unavoidable. These events do have
an everlasting effect on us, but they should not deter us from our natural
course. One might think that the less straightforward nature of “A
Noiseless, Patient Spider” would have nothing in common with this poem. In \"A
Noiseless Patient Spider,\" the poet (Whitman) uses the spider as a symbol for
how he sees his own soul. Each line of the first stanza, where he describes the
spider, has an approximate match in the second stanza, where he describes his
soul, and the journey it is taking. He compares his soul to the spider because
he sees in the spider\'s actions a mirror to the actions of his soul. The spider
is noiseless and patient, not because it isn\'t eager to get underway, but
rather because it \"knows\" that the best journeys require an element of
rationale. To be impatient would most likely result in the spider\'s death.
Whitman sees his soul in much the same light. He feels that it is on the brink
of learning and doing great things, but to rush into things would cause more
harm than good. Thus, his soul stands alone to better carefully consider how
best to proceed.
To follow a crowd always means the death of one\'s soul --
that the poet feels this way is evident in how he makes a point to say that his
soul is by itself. \"It launched forth filament, filament, filament, out of
itself…\" Here the poet is making a reference to what he will later mention in
the poem, and that is the idea of the bridge that the soul will have to cross in
order to access a new sphere. This metaphysical bridge will have to be quite
long, and he wishes to underline this point by making the thread that the spider
will use to launch itself into the air drawn out to an extreme. The spider is
tireless in its quest, and so too is the soul. The soul, like the spider, is
flinging out a \"gossamer thread to catch somewhere.\" And like the spider, the
soul is willing and able to wait until the moment shall arrive that is just
right to begin its travels. However, like the spider\'s fragile silk, this
bridge is also quite frail and prone to breakage from a careless act or an
unheeding nature. So, in spite of the careful and deliberate act of flinging out
a filament to catch on some unknown \"sphere\", it is possible that the soul may
never reach its destination. For Whitman, that is both the excitement and the
scariness of it all. Perhaps he is communicating to the reader the idea that,
though one may never get to where one is going, still, the journey is very
important.
“Traveling Through the Dark” is in the loose form of a sonnet
while “A Noiseless, Patient Spider” is free verse. They are both unscannable.
Although by the language of prose and the elements within these two poems seem
very different, the interpretation suggests that they both discuss man’s journey
through life. The physical in one, and the spiritual in the other.
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